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First Time
His fingers dance upon my skin
As he begs to be let in,
His lips, so warm, tease my ear
As his breath dances
The fear disappears.
Bodies close as close can be
Not a thing between him and me.
His kiss so soft,
Tongue hot as fire,
Coaxing my own to dance.
With him inside,
We lose track of time,
Our hearts beat
Through the pain
To brand new, sweet pleasure.
The first time of many,
At this point, is done.
I could lie here,
Forever,
In his arms, hot as the sun.
His fingers dance upon my skin
As he begs to be let in,
His lips, so warm, tease my ear
As his breath dances
The fear disappears.
Bodies close as close can be
Not a thing between him and me.
His kiss so soft,
Tongue hot as fire,
Coaxing my own to dance.
With him inside,
We lose track of time,
Our hearts beat
Through the pain
To brand new, sweet pleasure.
The first time of many,
At this point, is done.
I could lie here,
Forever,
In his arms, hot as the sun.
Literature
Erotic
I would draw every drop of lust
From the depths of your soul
Your back arched in ecstasy
Your body aching for my barest touch
How could I possibly be so cold
And deny you the pleasure you crave so much?
Literature
Shower Sex
Shower Sex
Letting the water run down my body.
I'm in a moment of bliss.
Washing away the negativeness from me.
A relaxing feeling overwhelms me.
You entered through the door, unexpected.
Told me that you loved me, you needed me.
Pressed me against the tiled wall.
Attacked my mouth with your own, made me moan.
The steam slowly rising, turning to mist.
Don't want to lose this moment.
Want it to stay like this for awhile.
Make me feel like something I was missing.
You entered through the door, unexpected.
Your hands roaming through my body.
Pressed yourself against me, wouldn't let me escape.
Told me you wanted to fuck me tonigh
Literature
Nude
I took off layer after
layer.
I stripped myself of my sticky c n.
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co
Wild briar b
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s
s m o flew away from me like bullets
leaving cyclamen bruises to bloom wildly beneath.
I rubbed off the blackberry syrup
From my pallid temples
And
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and I had a conversation about how there isn't a lot of good erotic poetry without using certain words and I ended up grabbing a notepad and pen and writing.I know the line 'Not a thing between him and me.' is probably grammatically wrong, but it flows really well like this, so I'm pretty much ignoring if it's wrong.
I had a title of First Time already, but First Time fits this piece and that one, so this got an -erotic added to it.
I'm not fully sure if it fits erotic, but after looking at the category, yea, this is where it goes. First upload of 2011. First upload in a few months.
Please let me know what you think. If I should write more like this (this as in erotic style).
No, I'm not putting a warning for maturity thing on this. If I'm given a nice, calm, logical reasoning for why it should have one with no cursing, no mention of certain words, etc. then maybe I will think about it.
Update: Jan 24, 2011
Holy crap! O.o This is my most faved deviation currently. Thanks folks!
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Well written!